(16-01-2022, 14:43)ivke Wrote: not bad for a first map but way overdecorated..also im guessing there is no reverse route?

0:00 the start might be confusing for starter players as its not fully blocked
0:05 fix those arrows
0:14 remove that car or place it in the left lane,people dont like cars messing up their racing lines,i made the same mistakes
0:16 i would place arrows on both sides but its your choice really
0:33 on the left place arrows
0:36 those plant pots are unnecessary

as i said pretty good for a first,but you dont have to overdecorate everything,this is my opinion and i personaly dont decorate maps that much so wait for someone more experienced to comment on this.
when (if) fixed,i would like to see it on the server

(16-01-2022, 15:36)kayra999 Wrote: Overdecoration is the problem of this one

here is the nitpick part
0.04 - left arrow wall is not that hard to make
0.08 + instead of some following decoration try decorating left side here
0.10 - maximum 2 or 3 cars should be there not in every single spot
0.14 - right wall is completely useless
0.18 - orange cone spam strike is normal for a new map maker just dont spam that object mix it with some other objects so it doesnt look lame
0.27 - personal choice but you dont have to decorate inside of here
0.31 - same thing as cones this part of the map usually has only 5 trees or so you dont have to make it a forest
0.35 - same as trees and orange cone (right side) -> left side is however looks out of place so you can just keep it like the doherty it is

extra
0.25 and 0.33 that goddamn light is that bright I was going to heaven for a second

well for a starter route is not that bad at all just a basic lesson dont spam same object thousand times thats what I learned from making maps it doesnt look good believe me.
Also if there is a R version of it please record it as well

(16-01-2022, 14:43)ivke Wrote: not bad for a first map but way overdecorated..also im guessing there is no reverse route?

0:00 the start might be confusing for starter players as its not fully blocked
0:05 fix those arrows
0:14 remove that car or place it in the left lane,people dont like cars messing up their racing lines,i made the same mistakes
0:16 i would place arrows on both sides but its your choice really
0:33 on the left place arrows
0:36 those plant pots are unnecessary

as i said pretty good for a first,but you dont have to overdecorate everything,this is my opinion and i personaly dont decorate maps that much so wait for someone more experienced to comment on this.
when (if) fixed,i would like to see it on the server

(16-01-2022, 19:01)kayra999 Wrote: for 0.33 invisible wall may be a solution but dont forget when its on server the arrow walls are half transparent so you can curve at the end of straight or put a enforcer to middle of police barricade and put a single arrow wall behind the enforcer which shows right so it looks like its carrying it-> like

  police barricade
          _ <single arrow  _________________wall
|
|
|
|< arrow wall on left
idiot writing system single arrow should be in middle of police barricade

(16-01-2022, 19:01)kayra999 Wrote: for 0.33 invisible wall may be a solution but dont forget when its on server the arrow walls are half transparent so you can curve at the end of straight or put a enforcer to middle of police barricade and put a single arrow wall behind the enforcer which shows right so it looks like its carrying it-> like

  police barricade
          _ <single arrow  _________________wall
|
|
|
|< arrow wall on left
idiot writing system single arrow should be in middle of police barricade

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(16-01-2022, 19:01)kayra999 Wrote: for 0.33 invisible wall may be a solution but dont forget when its on server the arrow walls are half transparent so you can curve at the end of straight or put a enforcer to middle of police barricade and put a single arrow wall behind the enforcer which shows right so it looks like its carrying it-> like

  police barricade
          _ <single arrow  _________________wall
|
|
|
|< arrow wall on left
idiot writing system single arrow should be in middle of police barricade

and just noticed on R version put a little curved arrow wall so people dont drive straight into lot in the last turn I mean

(16-01-2022, 20:35)Criticalus Wrote:

(16-01-2022, 19:01)kayra999 Wrote: for 0.33 invisible wall may be a solution but dont forget when its on server the arrow walls are half transparent so you can curve at the end of straight or put a enforcer to middle of police barricade and put a single arrow wall behind the enforcer which shows right so it looks like its carrying it-> like

  police barricade
          _ <single arrow  _________________wall
|
|
|
|< arrow wall on left
idiot writing system single arrow should be in middle of police barricade

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(16-01-2022, 19:01)kayra999 Wrote: for 0.33 invisible wall may be a solution but dont forget when its on server the arrow walls are half transparent so you can curve at the end of straight or put a enforcer to middle of police barricade and put a single arrow wall behind the enforcer which shows right so it looks like its carrying it-> like

  police barricade
          _ <single arrow  _________________wall
|
|
|
|< arrow wall on left
idiot writing system single arrow should be in middle of police barricade

and just noticed on R version put a little curved arrow wall so people dont drive straight into lot in the last turn I mean

i mean i puted a invisble wall there