South San Fierro

[KitsuneAmy]

Working title of South San Fierro; former title Around The Block, but that name has been taken between the time this track was originally made and now.

(This post was last modified: 27-01-2022, 00:31 by KitsuneAmy.)

[kayra999]

0.37 I am pretty sure you can find a more suitable barrier than this & the arrows on left are pretty much useless you can put another kind of barrier here to make it look normal

0.41 - 0.44 you dont need to arrows for this place as well put a normal and low barrier so you dont need to arrow the other side as well

1.18 finish that arrow

1.36 a arrow wall to show people turn to left would be great

1.45 same thing a arrow wall to show people where to go

1.57 left side needs an either road block or an arrow wall

2.03 right side needs some filling

2.21 a arrow wall to show the way

2.37 right side needs and arrow wall to show road is not there

facts to facts you probably didnt wanted to work on this too much you could do better with decoration and overall maping anyway good route could be better with some more mapping keep it goin

[KitsuneAmy]

0.37 I am pretty sure you can find a more suitable barrier than this & the arrows on left are pretty much useless you can put another kind of barrier here to make it look normal

0.41 - 0.44 you dont need to arrows for this place as well put a normal and low barrier so you dont need to arrow the other side as well

1.18 finish that arrow

1.36 a arrow wall to show people turn to left would be great

1.45 same thing a arrow wall to show people where to go

1.57 left side needs an either road block or an arrow wall

2.03 right side needs some filling

2.21 a arrow wall to show the way

2.37 right side needs and arrow wall to show road is not there

facts to facts you probably didnt wanted to work on this too much you could do better with decoration and overall maping anyway good route could be better with some more mapping keep it goin

0.37 I am pretty sure you can find a more suitable barrier than this & the arrows on left are pretty much useless you can put another kind of barrier here to make it look normal: I put an armco barrier all the way down the middle of the road until the fork.




0.41 - 0.44 you dont need to arrows for this place as well put a normal and low barrier so you dont need to arrow the other side as well



1.18 finish that arrow



1.36 a arrow wall to show people turn to left would be great



1.45 same thing a arrow wall to show people where to go



1.57 left side needs an either road block or an arrow wall



2.03 right side needs some filling



2.21 a arrow wall to show the way



2.37 right side needs and arrow wall to show road is not there



Plus some extra:

(This post was last modified: 30-01-2022, 03:49 by KitsuneAmy.)

[kayra999]

Decorations are good enough but cant say the same for arrow walls.I think you need to understand what how arrow walls are supposed to do.They need to start from some place to another end and it should close the other ways possible.
1.36 like this that left wall is literally half made
1.18 left is done now right wall is not finished
like these

[KitsuneAmy]

Decorations are good enough but cant say the same for arrow walls.I think you need to understand what how arrow walls are supposed to do.They need to start from some place to another end and it should close the other ways possible.
1.36 like this that left wall is literally half made
1.18 left is done now right wall is not finished
like these

1.36 like this that left wall is literally half made: Arrow wall goes along the entire side now.




1.18 left is done now right wall is not finished: I fixed it.



Other fixes I made based on what you said:







And some extra:

(This post was last modified: 30-01-2022, 22:55 by KitsuneAmy.)