Seems pretty good, but I'm not very keen on the Ocean docks part. It feels very generic and it's an exact copy of another track we already have minus the shortcut. Maybe you could change this part into something unique ?
Maybe use this road here and use the surrounding concrete ground for a path of return ? A gymkhana styled part the track wouldn't hurt.
Maybe use this road here and use the surrounding concrete ground for a path of return ? A gymkhana styled part the track wouldn't hurt.