The route is nice, I just wanted to get your attention to some spots on the map:
0:47 - Get the arrows on the right closer to the corner
0:49 - I'm sure I wouldn't know where to go, there's no indicators on the right nor left
0:55 - Perhaps close that entrance to the sewer with some canon objects?
1:00 - perhaps some short metal fences between the sidewalk and the train tracks?
1:01 - if i'm not mistaken, the way that nexoon took didn't had any arrows on the left (which would be clearly out of the track bounds)
1:06 - there's not much indications that the path which needs to be taken is to the left, perhaps bring the arrows closer to the corner from the alleyway you came out from?
Keep up the good work