Sprint Dogfish Rising

[ivke]

Map name: Dogfish Rising
Type: Sprint
Location: San Fierro
Author: :Ivkeee

Map layout:

Map showcase:



sorry for the cheesy quality it is better to watch it on a phone

[kayra999]

I guess its great apart from the arrow placement

Wait until scaftzi writes the every single one

[scaftz]

I guess its great apart from the arrow placement

Wait until scaftzi writes the every single one

lol

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Pretty odd starting line and the whole route seems annoying enough, to be honest. Just not something i would like to pick when choosing maps to play.

0:04 - Remove this grass maybe. Starting place is odd enough and visual obstruction just doesn't help.
0:14 - Remove guardrail, make the arrows coming out from the building, snaking left then right to the grass patch.
0:16 to 0:17 - Too many cones. Should not be cones even. Try lighthouse barrier or bollards.
1:11, 1:15 and 1:16 - Shabby wall could be a better in-between for the guardrails, better yet make the guardrails as one.
1:19 - This right corner should be using arrows i think.
1:33 - (The right arrows) Do it like what i told you at 0:14.
1:46 - Must this path even exist?

(This post was last modified: 26-06-2021, 19:15 by scaftz.)

[kayra999]

I guess its great apart from the arrow placement

Wait until scaftzi writes the every single one

lol

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Pretty odd starting line and the whole route seems annoying enough, to be honest. Just not something i would like to pick when choosing maps to play.

0:04 - Remove this grass maybe. Starting place is odd enough and visual obstruction just doesn't help.
0:14 - Remove guardrail, make the arrows coming out from the building, snaking left then right to the grass patch.
0:16 to 0:17 - Too many cones. Should not be cones even. Try lighthouse barrier or bollards.
1:11, 1:15 and 1:16 - Shabby wall could be a better in-between for the guardrails, better yet make the guardrails as one.
1:19 - This right corner should be using arrows i think.
1:33 - (The right arrows) Do it like what i told you at 0:14.
1:46 - Must this path even exist?

Told ya

[ivke]

I made some changes:

0:04 - Remove this grass maybe. Starting place is odd enough and visual obstruction just doesn't help.
dont know how to remove the grass,if you know how to tell me please


0:14 - Remove guardrail, make the arrows coming out from the building, snaking left then right to the grass patch.
dont know if this is what you meant,if it isnt i will make it better

0:16 to 0:17 - Too many cones. Should not be cones even. Try lighthouse barrier or bollards.
though adding arrows would be simpler and a casual player wont get confused as much

1:11, 1:15 and 1:16 - Shabby wall could be a better in-between for the guardrails, better yet make the guardrails as one.
again dont know what you meant,but i placed the guardrails better

1:19 - This right corner should be using arrows i think.

1:33 - (The right arrows) Do it like what i told you at 0:14.
i might look lazy coz of this but i added trees instead of arrows,i tried adding arrows for 30 minutes but i could not do it properly and make them look good and natural
1:46 - Must this path even exist?

i made a better route:



hope it looks better

[scaftz]

Images couldn't load for me, can't see what's going on.
About the grass, i am not allowed to tell how but i can remove it for you.

[ivke]

Huge thanks to scaftz for making these changes: